Monday, April 13, 2009

My story-writing assignment :>

The Sisters'

Theme: 3) Cherishing loved ones, memories and things that matter to us

Once upon a time in 1927,

Li Fong, Li Ling, and Lili are sisters. Their parents died at birth, so the three of them were sent to orphanages and grew up together. It had always been Li Fong's wish that her 2 younger sisters get adopted, as she wants them to have a family. They were later adopted into three different homes with different backgrounds. Li Fong was then named Megan Wong Leiying, Li Ling named Crystal Yeung Feili, Lili named Emily Cheng Tongling.

Emily was then sent to England. Megan became an unofficial mistress of Jack, a famous politician in the area, whom is voted as the mayor. Megan stayed alone with her adoptive mother and her son. Crystal had not been fairly treated since young and wants to get into a good family.

Crystal is arranged to marry Jack, a rich man’s son. Just when the wedding ceremony is going to start, the Police came and she was accused of killing her adoptive mother.

Crystal was sent to prison for killing her stepmother. Crystal got bullied in jail and often got beaten and tortured.

After a whole series of events, Crystal is charged for murder and is sentenced the death penalty. Along the way, Emily returns to Shanghai to look for her 2 sisters. She becomes a reformative officer at the prison where she reunites with her 2 sisters. As such, Megan pleaded for a job as a helper in the prison’s canteen to raise money to help Crystal get out of jail by getting the lawyer to appeal for her. Megan worked day and night and often meets her sister to know how she is doing. Crystal then changed her attitude and had a positive mindset to live and strives to get herself out of jail. She had completely changed from a gentle lady to an evil woman who will do anything just to get herself out of trouble.

After a chain of events, Crystal cheats Megan into taking the rap for her and she is sentenced to death while Crystal walks away scot-free. Emily got to know everything is arranged by her second sister and finds evidence to help Megan but somehow gets embroiled into this whole situation when she realizes the truth. Megan finally get to know everything is arranged by Crystal and she felt so sad at the same time mad at her as she also don't want to recognize Crystal as sister anymore.

Before Megan gets her death penalty, she wrote a letter to Jack to tell him to forget her. However, Jack cannot forget her, and is thinking of a way to rescue her. Emily tried all her ways to help Megan to escape from jail. She made it but Jack found them and advised Megan to go back. He said he had found a witness who can testify that Crystal bribed Megan and that he had found a lawyer to appeal to the case to rescue her. Emily did not trust him, but Megan fully trusted him, and they went back. Emily was focusing on how to arrange the "prison break", because she still do not trust Jack at all. Jack kept on thinking of an idea to rescue Megan in a legal way but Emily just kept on thinking of the "prison break”.

Crystal knew about this and she killed the witness. Crystal lastly got married. She give up to had honey moon with her husband and just to get both her sisters into trouble. It was then revealed that Megan would have to serve a 5-year imprisonment instead of death penalty and Emily to serve a 3-year imprisonment for planning the escape for Megan.

After serving the jail, Megan reunited with Emily. Crystal got attacked by an iron by Sunny’s mother and a deep scar was left on her face. Crystal then went back to find their sisters and had been kneeling down infront of their apartment for weeks to seek their forgiveness. She told them, “Do you still remember the times when the three of us were in the orphanage? I really do cherish those moments. I’m sorry, sister. Can we be together just like when we were young?”

After the emotional conversation between them, the sisters were patched back and they lived happily ever after, just like before.

I've changed everything. Hope this one will fit the criteria better.

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